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Rings the Bell!
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The story starts with a
surprising statement, a question, or a description.
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I used dialogue and other
details that highlight the five senses.
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Every event is important
to the story and is told in order.
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I can hear my voice. My
writing sounds like me.
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The ending ties my story
ideas together in a satisfying way.
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There are very few
mistakes.
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Getting Stronger
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The beginning needs more
spark.
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More details are needed
to make this experience come alive.
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Some sentences aren't
important. More time clues are needed.
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My voice could be
stronger. It doesn't always sound like me.
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The ending doesn't tie
things together.
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Mistakes make my story
hard to follow in some places.
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Try Harder
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The beginning is dull.
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Where are the details?
It's hard to picture what happened.
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Some events are
unimportant or are told out of order.
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I can't hear my voice at
all.
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The story just stops.
There is no ending.
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There are a lot of
mistakes.
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